Nowadays people’s life is changing rapidly and, as a result, family relationships are affected. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience
In recent times, the rate at which the lives of individuals are changing is at a rapid rate and this has affected relationships in families. This essay will argue that the advantages of these changes outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will examine some of the major disadvantages such as lack of family time and isolation, then analyze the positives which are better quality of life and access to modern facilities, before giving my opinion.
There are a number of reasons why families are experiencing changes nowadays. A major reason is the fact that member are moving to new locations for better opportunities. The aim is to increase earnings which would in turn improve the life of the person. For instance, there are people who have relocated to other parts of world for greener pastures and a better life. Furthermore, these places provide access to modern facilities such as rail networks and new technological initiatives like the internet and modern healthcare system.
However, there are several disadvantages that cause a strain in family relationships. The distance and busy lifestyle of most individuals who tend to move to new locations often make them isolated and most times unreachable. There are several barriers to communication such as time zone differences and the cost. For example, a resident of the United States who has family members in Nigeria will not be readily available to receive phone call due to the 6-hour difference in time. This could lead to homesickness due to little or no family time which has been known to cause depression.
To conclude, it is clear that rapid changes in people’s lives may lead to psychological challenges. While there are benefits such as access to improved facilities and earnings, I believe that family relationships should be valued above all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14141414141 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93094500415 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1214632764 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177830541095 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592060539942 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495789090843 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110855065507 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580006475002 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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