The nuclear family of today is much different than that of fifty years ago. It is
increasingly common for both parents to work, and this is often argued to be the
cause of social problems among their teenage children. It is agreed that the social
problems adolescents often experience are the direct result of their parents busy
work schedules. This will be proven by looking at a Canadian case study of this
phenomenon in action as well as the universal correlation that exists between youth
social problems and neglectful parents.
Firstly, teenagers of absent parents often do not get the direction they need to
develop as socially competent individuals. For example, it has been statistically
proven that depressed teenagers in Canada typically interact with their parents less
than one hour per day. This example makes it clear that without parental guidance,
adolescent people develop social abnormalities. Thus, it is clear that parents need to
prioritize more time for their teenage children, even if this means reducing the
number of hours they work.
Secondly, statistics clearly show a link between parental neglect and the numbers of
youths afflicted with social problems. For instance, the number of teenagers
suffering with anxiety is a figure that moves in tandem with the number of dual-
income households. The positive correlation between these trends makes it obvious
that parents who work too much are acting as a detriment to the mental welfare of
their children. It is thus clear that parents need to spend less time working for the
sake of their offspring.
After analyzing this topic, it can be seen that parents who spend copious amounts of
time away from their children cause more harm than good. Thus, it is recommended
that the modern family budget time for their developing young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23825503356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55733100996 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2443087085 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287027340564 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109359528651 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620923630999 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837383548907 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652342966006 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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