Nowadays,more and more people want to get things done instantly(services ,information ,tasks)why is this?do you think it is a positive or negative developement?
Time is a sacred resource available to gamut of species on this planet.Human beings ,with the advent of superior technological progress,are defining unimparable efficiency levels and achieving fortunate results.As compared to last three decades ,technological innovations have helped us to lead a fast paced life at an accessible cost.This paragraph will first discuss in detail the reasons for it and share some thoughts on positive side.
Information technology is an enabler for most of the people and machines,like smartphones and computers have really made our lives simple and has given an opportunity to get our tasks done in a short span of time,for that matter in a single click.The key characteristic of smart phone that is portability and numerous features have made it a relevant technology in today's time.For example,transferring funds or bookings online have become so convenient and secure by the use of one time password feature.furthermore,machines can process the data speedily and can provide instant results as compared to human brain.
In my opinion,this is a truly positive developement as everyone will have more time to work upon things that are more relevant to them.We as species,can consciously work upon ourselves and find an inner meaning or focus on more valuable dimensions of life.The more quickly we can complete one task,more time we have to utilize on another work.
To conclude,This generation has the means to get things done in fast paced way and innovations in every field has helped to drive this change for human good that can utilize the precious time in self-fulfillment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29571984436 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48924632143 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.214525612 49.4020404114 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 340.25 106.682146367 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 20.7667163134 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143900671808 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850379043942 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382796769892 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850379043942 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382796769892 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.41 50.2224549098 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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