Nowdays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face.Is this a positive or negative development?
Socialization method has drastically changed in the last few years. people these days become more familiar with the new social platforms such as Facebook, twitter, and Skype and most of them considered it as the best way to communicate rather than the traditional connections such as face to face way. this essay aims to discuss the positive and negative impacts of the new communication way in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, the new enhancements in the social field has positively affect people’s communication. As, it provides them a cheaper option to contact with all individuals around the world. Since, it’s only need an internet to be connected with your friends, colleagues, and relatives at any part of the globe. In addition, it expands people’s knowledge about other cultures. there is no doubt that contacting other foreign individuals via these platforms allows people to acquire latest information about other civilizations. For example, there are a plethora of discussion media platforms such as twitter, Instagram, Telegram, and etc, are considered as a great source for exchanging news, data and even experience with international users rather than meeting just a small group of people which ultimately earns limited experience and skills.
On the flip side, it’s irrefutable that increasing of using social media exacerbates the communication bound among people particularly the local individuals. Hence, it affects on their attitude as it makes them more isolated. Consequently, it separates users from their families due to imbalance of the needed socialization . For instance, plenty of families suffer from their children or teenagers disconnections and bad attitude. this unfortunately result in enormous using of these media. As, it allows them to meet various individuals who might affect on their behavior.
To sum up, in my point of view, I strongly believe that although online communication might have some negative impacts on users’ attitude, online platforms have conspicuous advantages on our daily life as it offers a great source of new information with low cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53453453453 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12617864753 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5686554458 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217832371189 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592362212868 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060306027646 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125739908412 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844182708944 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.