The number of people who are interested in and wearing fashionable clothes is increasing.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Fashion industry is rapidly gaining its popularity among youngsters. Nowadays, a majority of people prefer wearing trendy outfits to show their status of being rich, whereas some people completely oppose this idea and believe that it is a wastage of money. This essay agrees with the later viewpoint and will discuss both viewpoints in detail.
To begin with, most youngsters believe that wearing the latest fashionable clothes is a sense of satisfaction. That is to say, the famous TV celebrities wearing expensive clothes and shoes have a feeling that their style is unique, which is why they have a huge fan following. Certainly, it is a way to impress others because people always praise unique and beautiful things, instead of commonly available items. Furthermore, due to the development in the technology, it is easy to follow the latest fashion as all the websites have advertisements showing trendy clothes, shoes and jewellary and due to the wide range of options available to choose from, people consider it is a positive development.
On the other hand, there are people who opine that following latest fashion has merely a negative impact on the society. This is because, the branded clothes are way more expensive than normal clothes and people spend almost half of their salary on buying such clothes, resulting in no saving left for the future. As a result, such people would not be able to survive if there are uncertain situations, such as no job or economic crises. In addition, a majority of brands are international and people who prefer purchasing those brands from international market, are actually ignoring their local market, which eventually disturbs the local economy of a country. Lastly, the quality of stylish clothes is not very good in terms of durability and comfort as compared to local clothes.
To conclude, although one should stay up to date in terms of latest fashion and trends. However, considering the cost, quality and the impacts of international brands on local market makes me feel that the fashion has more negative effects on the society than positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08959537572 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71341726094 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5344831214 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282486485315 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853637288489 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503836835093 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14902880798 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399363559881 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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