The number of people working online from home grown in some countries What advantages and disadvantages can come of this trend

Essay topics:

The number of people working online from home grown in some countries
What advantages and disadvantages can come of this trend???

In the wake of globalization and revolution of modern technology, the standard of living has been improved and the way of working also changed. The Telecommuting is in trend nowadays in which people can work other parts of the world through the internet, which has its own share of merits and demerits, I would elucidate briefly in the following essay.
To begin with, it saves time as no time is wasted commuting to and from the office. It also saves money as no need to spend on fares of public transport or on petrol or diesel if they use their own vehicles. They can spend their saved time with family and friends which is very needed in the fast-paced hectic lifestyle nowadays. Furthermore, the worker can perform in the minor family commitment like dropping children for school. In addition, they can save from clothing as well as they do not have to spend money on office suite. Telecommuting also help employer because they not need to build and maintain big office. We all know that the rates of land are exorbitant and even maintenance overpriced.
In contrast, the Tele-commuters face few difficulties in this trend. First and foremost, they have to reserve a corner of the home for work and high-speed internet required. Sometimes they can get bored as they do not get office environment. More to it, the expectation of family members are increase and they forgot that the person should concentrate on work which increases stress. What is more, the employers also find difficulty to supervise Tele-commuters.

To conclude, as every garden has weeds, similarly the telecommuting has also the downside. On the whole, working from home gives great freedom and more beneficial than few drawbacks.

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Average: 7 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, in addition, in contrast, as well as, on the whole, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94791666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79932398902 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7202548054 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140512441948 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444895344029 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414974105083 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913599729158 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226695846831 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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