There is no denying the fact that phenomenon some people ponder that teacher have more influence than parents on children intellectual as well as social development is ubiquitous, across the globe due to its paramount important. I think reverse manner and I agree with statement and which will be elaborated in further paragraphs.
Out of all, the strongest one to prove my point that, nowadays,teacher can more foot impression on children's life as well as children are more spend time in school like 5 to 6 hours, when they are touch in teacher,so teacher have more influence on children's social development.To explain the, teacher can teach to all children that how to behave with public place as well as how to make new friends, which can increase to children social development.For instance,in Japan, the primary school teachers are teaching the common sense before the book knowledge. As a result, the children learn how to behave nice in the society. Apart from the, all children can get history and other knowledge by teacher, hence which can very helpful in their future life. Because of this reason teacher have more influence than parents on children. That fact is logical.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned support.The formost arguments they do that ,parents can be the best teachers influencing their children. The main reason is that children's characters are largely born with and natively influenced by their parents. A good example I can show here is that parents who are quite keen on music will have a child who has the same enthusiasm on the same subject to a large extent. Nevertheless, all of children's behavior can be changed bit by bit by conscious learning in school. The fact is that children who are in school learn consciously to improve their intelligence and social skills. Thus to be general, the influence of teachers on children's growth will be greater than their parents as time goes by.
To conclude, without any doubt, teacher has more effective on Children's life in many ways as well even parents are lay few impact on children as compared to teacher, hence teachers are more influencers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76102587617 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.820393296 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381490326049 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139500204153 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979609549463 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242948805227 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306999843317 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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