Once children start school, the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Skills are very important in current days to survive and to get success, so, children need to learn the skills from school age. Nowadays, so many primary schools started to teach these skills to students such as personal development and educational knowledge. I strongly agree to this statement, however, parents also should be a part in this.
Firstly, the primary school is vital part in children’s mental and social development, because they spend more time in school in a day and they have to talk and mingle with others apart from family during the day. Therefore, it will represent their social behavior and attitude, so, teachers should watch them carefully and teach good manner. For example, in Japan, the primary school teachers are teaching the common sense before the book knowledge. As a result, the children learn how to behave nice in the society.
Secondly, the tutors play essential role in children’s intelligence and brain functionality. Because, the knowledge will improve the children’s logical and learning skills. Moreover, children follow the teacher foot steps to solve the problems and to answer the questions. So, if teachers have great skills and knowledge, which will asset to students. To add to this, there should be a person to motivate the students for reaching goal, success and improve grades, certainly, this person is the teacher in schools. For instance, so many sport persons will have mentor and coach to improve their skills, as well learn new techniques in play.
To sum up, no doubt, teachers influence the students and stand behind their success. However, parenting is also important to make children responsible person in society or country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25182481752 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74457650597 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5365895568 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19658271794 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064198227515 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302026260269 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119469931081 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304202320731 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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