One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Technological advancement has played vital role in medical science and due to that people are living more with good health. Many people thinks that hike in number of old age group has demerits as they think its economic burden on nations, however I strongly believe that merits of perceptual growth of life span are abundant.
To begin with, ultra modern amenities help out in augment of long living life which always helpful for next generation as young people attain profound advice from them. Additionally, long life expectancy create more researchers, lawmakers and writers who can help society to make people living life with ease. Moreover, youth cherishes great life is gift from their parents and guardians, and by increasing life they can contribute more in society. For instance, Japan has the highest rate of life expectancy even though on positive note they are leading in economic growth as well as in healthy lifestyle. Medical advancement become blessing on human being.
On the other hand, some people opine that more numbers of old people are burden on society as they can not do hard and productive work. Economic growth will less affected by long life and by taking care of them nations can waste enormous energy on them which create slump in growth rate. Time and energy both can not use properly by nation to ameliorate situation in under developed and developing countries.
In recapitulation, improvement in life span of any country receive great efforts from knowledgeable old experienced people. I Firmly deem that, advantages of life expectancy are innumerable than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70316492129 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5634912021 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229037453984 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818720220694 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390432395704 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133307451648 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341104411411 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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