One way to solve the problem of congestion on the roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles.
How could this alleviate congestion?
What other measures can you suggest to deal with congestion in cities?
One of the major concern on road is the problem of heavy traffic. This essay will discuss how higher tax on private vehicles can alleviate this problem and propose other possible measures to curb this.
With regards to levying substantial taxes on private automobiles, an important outcome is that only affluent individuals can afford to maintain it. As a result, an average person will hesitate to purchase a car and the sales will drop drastically. For example, in India, in Union territories, the taxes on motor vehicles is very low, which makes if affordable for middle-class families. Consequently, if there is an increase in tax charges, then such families will not purchase and use other means of available transportation. Accordingly, there will be reduction in flow of traffic.
Other cardinal measures to combat problems of traffic-jam are ameliorating public transportation and creating bike lanes. With regards to the former, government needs to improve modes of public transport by construction of trams and metro rails, which should have greater frequencies to maintain convenience and effectiveness. As for the latter, construction of bike lanes will also reduce traffic congestion and also encourage go green campaigns by reducing emissions. For instance, majority of the European countries such as Britain and Germany follow aforesaid model of transport system, as a result, they are the most minimal polluted cities in the world.
In conclusion, although higher taxes is one of the measures, improving public transportation and idea of constructing bi-cycle lanes will assist in minimizing problem of traffic congestion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, if, so, then, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48818897638 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08834115274 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1990447358 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206858795778 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693218101758 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698372242492 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131219857257 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928469398489 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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