Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits.
To what extent do you agree?
The nature of people are assumed prior to their birth basis the ecosystem, and nothing in this world could be executed to amend such behaviours. I do not concur with the given assertion. This essay shall delineate the key factors such as environmental impact and life goals that portray the actions of an individual.
The surrounding of a person drastically affects the mindset of a person. According to some researchers, a pupil's brain is so fresh that it dramatically learns from every sort of happenings which they hear and see around it. Therefore, people behave in the same manner as the individuals around them react in. For instance, infants learn the language which others speak in the similar atmosphere. This results in acknowledging that a person could adopt a personality on the basis of company they live in.
Furthermore, many sources foster people to target a particular thing in their life. An objective in life is set basis what a person feels while seeing someone such as celebrities and social influencers. This encourages humans to srtive harder for the flourishment of their career and to achieve their goals. To illustrate, many youngsters from poor families study hard and earn a powerful designation; thus, they live a luxurious lifestyle.
In conclusion, genes affect the body of the next generation in various manners that could lead to similar behaviours with the parents. However, anticipating a common character before the birth is not favourable as segments such as the surrounding and willingness contributes to build a specific personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding individuals'?
Suggestion: the surrounding individuals
...re, people behave in the same manner as the individuals around them react in. For instance, infants learn t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21176470588 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97553784243 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1192386928 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813688104697 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278002853964 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030839328339 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464579907624 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132244426819 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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