Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state? Do you agree or disagree?
Many countries have different types of taxes such as the goods tax and income tax. However, some people argue that they earn the money by their hard work and should have the possession of the entire income. This essay disagrees with this assertion because the tax money is used for the development and maintenance of public places and it also contributes to the medical and education sectors of the country.
A nation requires capital for the development and maintenance of the public places such as roads and highways, and parks. Traffic is the biggest issue in many countries and a government requires funds to make new roads and highways to fix this problem. Therefore, money collected by the means of various taxes can be used for the construction of roads and highways to decrease traffic. Besides, people go to parks to relax and breath fresh air after their busy schedule. This way, it becomes important to make many parks and provide appropriate gardening to maintain the parks and their greenery. For example, Japan has no traffic challenges and the finest air quality due to the development of new roads and parks and their quality maintenance.
Education and health are the most crucial sectors of every state that are required for every individual. The tax amount can be used to provide free education to individuals, so that they can get a quality education and can study in the top universities. Moreover, the health of an individual is of the utmost importance that should be given priority. A government can use the income from tax to provide treatments at reasonable prices along, free health check-ups in the countryside areas. Consequently, people would grow positively and live a pleasant life with better education and health services. To illustrate, Canada, takes high taxes but provides free education and health services to their citizens.
To conclude, some people feel that they should not be required to pay taxes because they earn it by doing a job. However, every individual should pay the taxes as it in return provides many benefits to people by the growth and development of the country’s essentials sections.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03081232493 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7239971037 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8127230643 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249519836933 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862422876781 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119146154333 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199740750509 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14836538803 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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