The overuse of Natural resources can cause an ultimate exhaust of them. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Should the government discourage people from the overuse of natural resources? Agree or Disagree
Nature, the supreme power is being in existence and has created an endless life-cycle to prosper the perfect life for its resources and living things. Man is part of nature and is social animal has been depending on the natural resources even after, the invention of sophisticated tools. However, the incessant usage of the natural resource without bounds will lead to the exhausting them and disturb the pattern of lifecycles.
It is the fact that natural resources are vital in our lives and due to tremendous increase population and demand, with the improved technology, the natural resources have been using up at higher percentages as never before. In addition, the development and expansion of cities in greater volumes have been eating up the forest lands curtaining the space for the forest which is considered the most reliable natural resource. In a recent survey conducted by the African government has revealed that the Amazon forest has been reduced by 50% in the last 15 years. If this continues, the future mankind will not have knowledge of vast forest existence.
To control the situation of over usage of natural resources, the government should impose intricate and stringent laws which should include planting trees, limited usage of wood and paper, reduced usage of natural water and so on. People should be given education on the production of natural resources. For instance, production of goober gas out of cow dung, rainwater harvesting, leaving space for magic soak pits etc.
In conclusion, I personally believe that it is the mere responsibility of every human being to conserve the natural resource by bounding its usage and also government to implement unbreakable laws to protect the resources from our nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18727915194 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7415530861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1457872483 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25443832293 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963161926677 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623829102607 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154867308179 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356440804312 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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