In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers.
What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
In the last century, we have seen many developments and innovations over the world such as the invention of antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. In my opinion, the computer is one of the strongest and most effective inventions among other developments in many demographic regions. In this essay, I will discuss how the computer has influenced many people and helped them in improving the education system, automation, and medical services, as compared to other modernizations.
To begin with, computers have improved the education system all over the world in many different ways, which includes online classes for students and studying on the computer rather than attending lectures physically at college. Computers have many benefits for school children such as attending classes from home, although it has some adverse effects on school children such as weaken their eyesight. In international universities, for instance, students had to attend college classroom classes and they had to travel long distances to attend lectures, but nowadays, after the invention of computers, they are able to attend classes on computers using the internet, while sitting at home.
Furthermore, computers have played a vital role in automating many manual processes in the manufacturing industry. People used to do many official work-related tasks by using their hands, but since a few years, the computer has been doing the tasks for them. Robotic processes are being used widely in many manufacturing industry, mining, and transportation. Additionally, computers are widely used for national border security at night. In many factories, for instance, many manual processes are widely completed by computers by a single mouse click on the keyboard.
Another point, which could be made for computers is, it has improved medical sciences by using computers software applications. Many different kinds of computer applications have been developed to cure spreadable diseases. Therefore, some of the spreadable diseases have been completely removed by using such computer applications. For example, computers have created many advanced technologies such as x-ray, ultrasound, and other medical instruments, to find solutions for other deadly diseases such as cancel, tumor, and diabetes.
To sum up, computers have played an important role in the development of many technologies in the medical sector, education system, and manufacturing industry. Computers could be very useful in the upcoming future as well in many aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63517060367 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04226762277 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3831085113 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.294117647 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153271459541 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612803200065 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422963738394 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965378088493 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345666931315 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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