A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been argued for quite a long time whether people should be supported by the government authorities for their health-related issues. However, many of us believe that we are responsible for any kind of diseases ourselves. In my opinion, the government should be responsible for health relates problems and help them to fight against different spreadable diseases. In this essay, I will discuss further on how the government should support people in fighting against critical health issues by using their money from taxes and raising awareness among people to decrease down the health problems.
To begin with, in every nation, people pay taxes to the government authorities for public services such as medical, education and better transportation. So, authorities should utilize this tax money paid by the general public properly by providing good medical services, which could be helpful in taking care of health-related issues. Moreover, if they build a group of medical fitness teams, who would be responsible for taking care of critical health problem, then it would be easier for the government to tackle the health issues. In the past, there was a lower number of options to tackle the health-related problems, but now there are many possibilities to challenge any serious health problem. To illustrate, government bodies should spend more on the well-being of people and secure public health by introducing advanced health policies.
Another point which could be made while dealing with health-related problems is that health organizations should raise awareness among people by creating some kind of advertisements against critical health problems such as obesity, tuberculosis, and diabetes. Advertising on problematic health issues could lead to a decrease in the number of health-related issues, however, some people think that advertisements are only for marketing purpose. Many social media websites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram, for instance, can play an important role in decreasing health-related critical problems by broadcasting advertisements, it could be helpful for people on taking preventing actions to avoid unhealthiness.
To sum up, the government health department should be responsible for fitness and health issues, they should use the money appropriately by investing in medical services. Nevertheless, some kind of awareness campaigns could be raised by authorities to decrease down such issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ould utilize this tax money paid by the general public properly by providing good medical serv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61725067385 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12817140969 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501347708895 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0582400554 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.857142857 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124480955832 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599716690588 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286991965459 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933060220417 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266172019198 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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