People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this. What measures can be taken to fix this
Nowadays, the health of human beings is decreased, due to sedentary life style and diet habits, as compare to earlier people. However, there are lot of causes, which are formulating unhealthier life style. Although, some measurements, are also deter this aspects. This write up, discuss both reasons and solutions
To begin with, the foremost cause of unhealthier society is, sedentary work hours, hence people always do sitting jobs, as it may leads to health consequences such as obesity, Vision problems and heart illness. Secondly, the unbalanced diet such fast foods and packed foods, are being preferred by individuals. These aspects intensify the conundrums of immune system of human body. Finally, the people use various vehicles for travelling rather than to walk or use of bicycle, therefore, the community has been affected by various medical conditions.
On the other hand, there are various tangible pragmatic aspects to curb health related issues. Primarily, the daily exercise would be beneficial to build fit society. Despite of this, the yoga classes and gymnasium, has been introduced by local management. Furthermore, stress-free life and balanced diet can upgrade fitness and activeness. For instance, in INDIA, most of people prefer home- made food. Meditation classes are being taken to overcome the stress situations. Lastly, the working hours should be fixed, because, the workers cannot obtain the free time activities, as they do long hours working.
To Sum up, no doubt, the health of people have been mitigated as compare to past decades. However, some solutions such as fixed working hours, daily exercises, balanced diet and stress-free life, can curb the health related problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deterred'.
Suggestion: deterred
.... Although, some measurements, are also deter this aspects. This write up, discuss bo...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ough, some measurements, are also deter this aspects. This write up, discuss both re...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...and activeness. For instance, in INDIA, most of people prefer home- made food. Meditation clas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42696629213 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67035157597 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3974438216 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184888084535 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529775720824 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321223101853 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1031382248 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320380891488 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.