It is considered that individuals can eat a huge different cuisine from other nations. Hence, they are eating a more foreign food instead of nearly growing food. I believe its disadvantages are eclipsed by its advantages.
To commence with merits that they enjoy the different food and they try to cook at home. To explain it, when the masses eat food from separate nations they like to eat very happy and they cooked the same food at home. With this they learn a new technique to cooking at house. Therefore, they can cooked at home at very low price.
Further shifting towards with demerits, they waste their money. To explicate it, they visit the other state and they eat many expensive bread. they reduce their savings and waste many fund. For example, a survey was conducted by the American food industry that 90% humans 80% misspend their money on the food. Thus, they ruin their future funds.
Furthermore, it is very harmful for the body. In other words, with this they can surrounded by the many fatal disease. In many nations few food very spicy and oily. This is very dangerous for heart. Secondly, kids have weak immune system so they can easily sick from this kinds of food. To epitome, A headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that Italy people were died with heart attack because they were eat many oily food. Hence, they can loose their precious life.
In conclusion, although it is very good to learn and enjoy new food technique yet it is harmful for body and their pocket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cook'
Suggestion: cook
...o cooking at house. Therefore, they can cooked at home at very low price. Further s...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...an cooked at home at very low price. Further shifting towards with demerits, they wa...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun bread seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much expensive bread', 'a good deal of expensive bread'.
Suggestion: much expensive bread; a good deal of expensive bread
...they visit the other state and they eat many expensive bread. they reduce their savings and waste ma...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...tate and they eat many expensive bread. they reduce their savings and waste many fun...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fund seems to be countable; consider using: 'many funds'.
Suggestion: many funds
...ad. they reduce their savings and waste many fund. For example, a survey was conducted by...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'surround'
Suggestion: surround
...ody. In other words, with this they can surrounded by the many fatal disease. In many nati...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...the many fatal disease. In many nations few food very spicy and oily. This is very ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little food'.
Suggestion: little food
...the many fatal disease. In many nations few food very spicy and oily. This is very dange...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...une system so they can easily sick from this kinds of food. To epitome, A headline w...
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Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eaten'.
Suggestion: eaten
...ied with heart attack because they were eat many oily food. Hence, they can loose t...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much oily food', 'a good deal of oily food'.
Suggestion: much oily food; a good deal of oily food
...with heart attack because they were eat many oily food. Hence, they can loose their precious l...
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Line 7, column 476, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ere eat many oily food. Hence, they can loose their precious life. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28180624059 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3019475383 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.65 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38325677461 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122422890333 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114440310255 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23610848505 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859174097466 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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