People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technology has dominated almost all aspects of human's lives and it is apparent in individuals' daily routines. WHile we live more comfortabe due to this improvements and progressions in technology, I believe that the convections of each society are treathened.
On the one hand, the comfort and easiness that modern life style brings for the residents of the globe should not be understimated. New inventions and achievements in technology and science provide us accessing to more products in the market that assist people to lead a happier and simpler life. Take for example the online shopping which gives the fellows the opportunity to order their indispensable items through internet and consequently they do not have to drive or walk to buy and it will save their time. Furthermore, machines can fulfill some jobs much better than human especially those that need more accuracy and attention. A particular salient example of this is the invention of computer machine which revolutionized the individuals' life style in 1889 and impact their life drastically.
On the other hand, the expansion of technology in developing countries influenced people's life style and traditions in various ways. Firstly, people are reluctant to do some physical activities and they pursue a sedentary life style which will lead to severe health problems such as stroke and heart attacks that are debilitating. Secondly, due to the facilities that technology brings to our lives people make less phone calls and they prefer to send emails or messages to contact with others and this leads to a society in which the residents suffer lack of true communications and brings isolation for people. TO support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that the intimacy and closeness among people and particularly the young generation diminish almost 45% in modern life.
In conclusion, although technology could bring a large number of benefits to our life, a variety of social traditions and customs are vanished as a result. governments should tackle this problem by taking some steps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 3, column 736, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25219941349 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90857648465 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3860562874 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162698351131 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056044096155 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292008009467 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102103688467 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00841213996183 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.