People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
People work industrially to earn more and more money so they can avail facilities of life as much as possible. In my opinion, I agree that during this procedure, several traditional ways of living, meeting and celebrating the festivals have abolished.
Indeed everyone wants to spend a luxurious life in which one can enjoy comfort and ease. However, in achieving this life goal, people have ignored plenty of rituals and norms. For instance, nowadays children do not get as much attention of their parents as it used to be given to them in the past. They do not experience the joy of family gatherings, meal times and company of their parents instead they are habitual of having time with technology which is bought by hard-earned money of their parents.
These day people have become extremely busy that they are no longer inclined towards meeting their relatives, friends and even parents face to face. They find this difficult so they purchase latest and expensive mobiles for communication. Albeit they consider meeting face to face a wastage of their precious time. Similarly, traditional ways of celebrating social, religious and cultural events have lost their significance because people prefer giving their time to their businesses and doing part-time jobs to augment their income level instead of performing typical lengthy rituals.
In the past, people used to travel long distance on public transport to spend holidays and festivals altogether with their family members, but now their goal is to acquire as much wealth as required to buy luxury car. In the vague of priority shift, people no longer care about living a conventional life rather contemporary.
In conclusion, I think people should not give this much stress only on earning money and modern living rather they should also be attentive towards keeping traditional methods of living alive. As maintaining the balance between money-making and social life is the only sustainable way to a healthy and livable society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ating the festivals have abolished. Indeed everyone wants to spend a luxurious lif...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20123839009 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67517342019 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6713133349 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178970616544 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065823201014 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043106589204 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111002432905 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593573546523 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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