You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.
In your letter, you should:
• give details of book
• say why you need this book
• tell how you will pay for it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anita Mehar and I belong to Narowal city. I am in need of a book which I could not find from the book stores of my city. Therefore, I am writing this letter to request you to send me the book.
Author of the book is Mr.Jam Pual and its name is Social Science and Technology. Moreover, second edition of the book is available in my city but I need the third one which is the latest edition and probably this is the reason that it is hard to find it on book stores of small towns as mine is.
Basically, I am preparing for Central Superior Services Exam and this book is immensely helpful to prepare paper of Social Sciences. It contains relevant content and its material is tremendously useful for the exam preparation.
I will transfer you cost of the book and postal charges, too in your bank account if you confirm me about sending the book. Please forward me details of your account before you dispatch it so that I could immediately submit the amount into your account.
An early response will highly be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Anita Mehar.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jam
...the book. Author of the book is Mr.Jam Pual and its name is Social Science and...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58291457286 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46827295994 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1026794326 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34172415436 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118168282025 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119017901697 0.0603063233224 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157947751147 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120954149712 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.