Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Children’s teaching places often raise arguments because many people think that children should be taught at home, however others believe that school is a vital place for them to learn. In my opinion, school is the most suitable institute for their overall development while parents can be attentive towards progression of their child at school.
Those people who believe educating children at home is the best method think about their safety and comfort. In other words, at home children get education under the supervision of their parents which is a secure way for them. Because of going to school everyday, they may encounter harsh weather conditions as well as unsafe society. In addition, learning at home provides them with flexible hours to study due to which they can adopt lessons better.Therefore, it is most appropriate for them to acquire knowledge in a relaxed atmosphere of home without facing any distraction of the outside world.
Others have opinion opposite to this, they think that in order to educate children, they should be sent to schools which is the best place for them to learn. In schools, they do not acquire academic knowledge only, but also grasp other virtues, for instance discipline, punctuality and socializing with others. Since they interact with their peers in classes, they develop better communication and socializing skills. Similarly, when they follow a fixed schedule of school timings, they unintentionally become disciplined and punctual.
In my opinion, to become educated individual of society, children need attention of parents and school administration equally. Only academic excellence will not suffice to educate a child, even other values must be taught to him to make him an effective individual of a society. Therefore, while teaching the child at home, which is a protected place, could permit him to be more concentrated towards studies, school will let the child to gain other expertise along with education. Hence, school is better than home-based education.
To conclude, at home children are more relaxed and can develop better understanding of academic knowledge whereas at school they get to attend classes with their class fellows which offer them the opportunity to obtain other valuable skills, too. I think I learned more at school than at home because I got to observe a lot of things and people during my school years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ay for them. Because of going to school everyday, they may encounter harsh weather condi...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... to which they can adopt lessons better.Therefore, it is most appropriate for them to acq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27532467532 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79646790689 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522077922078 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4727953613 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9375 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354867316092 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131380648497 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857729043687 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224915734915 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829596464727 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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