You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.In your letter, you should:give details of booksay why you need this booktell how you will pay for it.

Essay topics:

You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.

In your letter, you should:

give details of book

say why you need this book

tell how you will pay for it.

Dear Sir,

Hope you are doing well.

I was looking for a book for a long time. Unfortunately, I could not find it in my city. I even checked on many e-commerce website but it was not available there either.

One of my friends gave me your reference and told me that book is available in your book store.

The book name is “Success guide for Program Management Office” written by Nicholas Wilson. This guide has over 40 test samples.

Furthermore, I am in need of this book because I am planning to take the Program Management Office exam (PMP) as it will be helpful for me to become an expert and certified PMO Professional. Consequently, it will help me further to grow in my career.

As you are in another city, I can make the online payment via Google Pay, Paytm or I can make the bank transaction, whichever suits you well. As well as I shall bear all the charges related to logistics.

I would request you to courier me the book as soon as possible. Also, please provide me your bank account details or online payment method details so that I can transfer the cost as soon as I get my book.

Hope to hear from you positively.

Regards,

Kanchan

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun e-commerce seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much e-commerce', 'a good deal of e-commerce'.
Suggestion: much e-commerce; a good deal of e-commerce
...t find it in my city. I even checked on many e-commerce website but it was not available there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62910798122 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69119349494 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7675100898 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276827803467 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829710641447 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076374082691 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130644229129 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661222093897 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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