In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opi

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

In Many Countries, there is a huge disparity in salaries among people. One hand there are people who are earning exceptionally good and on the other hand, there are people who are struggling to meet their basic needs. Therefore, some people argue that the government should cap the salaries. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, this difference in salary is good as it encourages people to work harder.In this essay, I shall be discussing both the sides while lending my support to my opinion on this matter.

Firstly, If there is a limit on salaries people will lose the motivation to work harder. As a human being, we have a tendency of wanting more and more in order to make our life better. Hence, this inclination push our limit to work harder and if there is already pre-defined standard salaries, this will hurt the morale of people.

Secondly, having few wealthy people in the society does no harm in my opinion. In fact, it works as an inspiration for common person to do work more and make their lifestyle better.

On the contrary, some people believe that this might create an unhealthy competition among people. As people tend to compare themselves with others, they might not appreciate what they already have and end up feeling unsatisfied instead. Therefore, people might get into unfair practices of making easy money due to excessive cutthroat competition.

To Sum up, every coin has two sides. Hence, there is always pros and cons of everything. There is no doubt that a huge difference in remunerations might affect people in some ways but I believe, controlling the compensation is not a good option to be considered. Government should rather construct some trainings as well as education programs to empower poor people and help them become more skilled so that they can also work harder and make good money.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88291139241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63569982273 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.109086961 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2941176471 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358039430963 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102547095773 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082079648031 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178150500259 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965769793541 0.056905535591 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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