In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely agreed that people who do some extraordinary jobs might be entitled to earning very high wages. However, it is argued that government should make a salaries’ ladder with a reasonable cap for all professions to ensure a great fair among all workers. This essay aims to discuss such a debatable topic in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To start with, it is irrefutable that there is a conspicuous variation among all people’ skills and attitude. Therefore, some employees might show very high performance and think out of the box to enhancing their communities. For instance, scientists who spend most of their time trying to explore the world and finding many ways to tackle some rare diseases or seeking for new energy sources to improve the quality of life. Indeed, such valuable efforts toward the entire globe deserve higher salaries than other regular employees whose contribution might not help to flourish their communities as scientists.
On the flip side, it should not be forgotten that government should design a good salary scheme for all occupations for many reasons. Firstly, having fixed wages might participate in alleviating the gap between rich and poor people which helps in ensuring a sustainable balance in any community. To elaborate, there is a link between people’ income and the cost of living as it might tend to be more expensive if some of them have a high salaries. Therefore, the best way to preserve the cost of living and make it more affordable for most of the people as well as to reduce the gap between all individuals is to control wages through a studied scheme.
To sum up, although some of workers do lots of usual tasks, I completely believe that all jobs’ salaries must be supervised by government to ensure a high level of fairness among all workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99677419355 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82148181376 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0265141559 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263271822249 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932598199486 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452322365615 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153684098334 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425929811616 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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