Many people believe that Social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and Society.
To what extent do you agree?
Craze of social websites such as Facebook is growing rapidly nowadays. While some people believe that Social websites are beneficial, I agree to a greater extent that they are having a detrimental effect on the individuals and society.
To Support, This is not hidden that social website has become an ardent habbit of a major group of individuals and communities. New generation tend to spent most of their time on social websites such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter which is resulting them to be disjointed from their families and surroundings.
Many people believe that these websites are connecting people around the globe. It helps people to know individuals from different countries and communities. Which is true but at the same time it is disconnecting people from the society that they live in as they spend a huge time connecting with people who they have no idea about.
In addition to this, Teenagers are the future of the community and this group is at the top of running behind the glitter of the social websites.
As people on social platforms shows a completely different side of their lives which is 90% fake. This fake fairy tale fascinates adolescents so much that they start developing a though of having the same lifestyle.
This affect them mentally. Most of the young kids are influenced negatively such as they develop a feeling of jealousy and frustration if they are not able to lead like their influencers.
Furthermore, crime rate has also increased due to socials websites since people connect with strangers on these platforms. There is an enormous number of fake profiles in these websites. Many examples have been seen of falling into a trap with the people meet on Social websites.
To conclude, Local communities and individuals has made socials websites an extremely important part of their lives that they are lacking behind in forming a bond with the people around them. Consequently, It is effecting the moral values of our society.
Social websites on the other hand are beneficial as well as many people are doing online businesses on such platforms and earning their bread and butter. So, if these websites are used fairly we can avoid the negative impacts which they are having on our society and individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 19, column 169, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...e lacking behind in forming a bond with the people around them. Consequently, It is effecting the mora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05039787798 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70645172099 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503978779841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9828945674 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.210526316 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255615957659 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837211377211 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630529090083 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115594109025 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755124103918 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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