People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been argued for quite a long time whether people should pick their academic subjects according to their interest or as per jobs available in the industry. However, while I strongly disagree with the statement that they should select education streams on the basis of availability of the jobs, I believe they should choose it according to their strong curiosity. In this essay, I will provide some compelling evidence further to support my agreement.
With regards to interest, people perform effectively and efficiently when they get a job in the area of their own interest. Effectiveness helps them to achieve milestones in their professional careers. Moreover, if they work on tasks related to their hobby then they do better, creative, and faster. For instance, athletes’, who are energetic and keen interested in sports since their childhood, do better in sports activities because of their interest.
On the other hand, if people pick their educational streams as per the job market then they would not be able to perform that specific job perfectly and effectively. Furthermore, working hard at work without any interest in the job could lead to frustration among people. Consequently, they would fail at their jobs or in their professional careers. To exemplify, in many multinational companies, software engineers, who are forced to do this job due to the wide availability of this profession, have to develop logical applications without their interest which leads to application functionality failure because of incorrect logic created by them.
To sum up, people should choose their academic course subjects according to their curiosity and interest which could help them do a job in the area of their hobby. On the other hand, they should not be forced to work in the area where they can get jobs easily, otherwise it would become difficult for them to survive in their professional careers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91599521531 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.939515865 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372626267229 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148786299942 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775767395367 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252607313123 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041747919406 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.