Nowadays celebrations of events like birthdays and weddings are all about spending extravagant money to display their wealth in the world. The essay will be dealing with the importance of the events and reasons behind excessive spending.
Events like birthdays and marriages hold a special place in the life of every person. As in one case the person celebrates being welcomed to the world and in the other case, the person is entering a new phase in life with someone whom they love. Undoubtedly, both of these are significant events in one’s life and in many cultures across the world these events are celebrated grandiosely.
However, nowadays, many people have made it as a grand display of wealth to the society in order to prove their supremacy in the society. Moreover, the events have lost the feeling of a personal and family affair, but have become an event in which a large number of people are invited to a mass spending fest and gather an appreciation of people from various societies. For instance, numerous documentaries have been produced by BBC highlighting the modern trend of the Indian weddings which happen at a very grand scale and involve a large number of attendees with money being spent into hundred or sometimes millions of thousands. These weddings also waste a lot of food which could have been put into the stomach of the needy and hungry people. Thus, these celebrations are not in any way similar to the weddings that used to happen in past and have lost their charm. It is only about highlighting the wealth of one’s family and purely a gimmick to earn a name by financially burdening themselves.
In conclusion, one will agree that these events hold an important place in one’s life and are to be celebrated on a great level and the spending on wedding and birthday celebrations are growing multi-folds and have become a big business market to cash on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69415145658 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.909591894 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198377837399 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753168314332 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548089033377 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133603269851 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036203906418 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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