Write a letter to change the topic of your presentation at the upcoming conference.
1) Why do you want to change?
2) What will be your new topic?
3) What equipment do you need at the time of your presentation?
DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am aware that I am a little late to address the issue, but I feel it be appropriate to write to you as a lot is at stake in the upcoming conference. Allow me to elaborate.
As you are aware, I have been bestowed the task of giving a presentation on Company Law Act, 1996. However, it has come to my knowledge that the act has been repealed by a recent notification circulated by the government. Further, I do not think it to be appropriate to have a presentation on the said topic.
However, the conference is to address the concerns of the employees of the organization on wider issues. Further, our company does not have anybody to highlight the recent hot topic of “Sexual Harassment at Workplace”. There has been a spike in number across the world of women facing harassment at workplace. As such, I think it will be better to address the topic which is hotly debated.
I have everything prepared from my end to address all the queries, issues and questions that the employees from our company will swing at me. However, I will need a projector with a remote, portable mic and print out of worksheets that I will e-mail a day prior to the conference.
I hope you will accede to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59649122807 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92818264739 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7697039315 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247858137261 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774611703633 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576549630825 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115877101714 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235171983719 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.