People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, children whether have more opportunities to chose whatever they want or not has evolved a controversial topic. While some people claim that nowadays children have more right to decide than ever, I strongly believe that it is under controlled seriously than their parent were.
Obviously, it is apparent that children have been giving more levels of autonomy with regard to friends and clothes choice. In terms of friends, children may be authorized to chose whatever their friends to accompany with regardless of their different background. It is uncommon in the pass when the majority of wealthy parents only permitted their children to play or communicate with those coming from the same privileged class. Additionally, today these stereotypes in the past about which clothes children wear are likely to be faded. It is common that the young girls could dress menswear, which was never case in parent’s generation.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that parents may get involve intensively in their decision about their study and career. Take Viet Nam as an obvious example. Nowadays, each family only has one to two children hence they are all hope and pride of their parents. Many parents would prefer their children to be more outstanding than their peers in current context of harsh competition even in the primary school. They force their children to take extra classes, tutorials after exhausted period at school. Consequently, the young generation today meet heavy burden of study and lack of time to rest and sleep much less playing. There are many regrettable suicide cases reported because of depression and pressure. Another visible reason for my belief is that children nowadays may be under overprotected by their parents. In ever-increasing crimes society, many parents rarely allow their children to play outdoor activities comfortably without their supervision. They guard their children from possible harm by strict curfew and restrictions, but this practice may lead to curtail their freedom inherently.
In conclusion, although nowadays children more make their own choice than in the pass, I personally agree that they are under controlled by their parent about their education and career path choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30919220056 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71731838069 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587743732591 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0283835528 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154056333643 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541248248475 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503622882852 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123114226683 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050527430787 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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