Indeed, the tendencies show a clear picture that the modern children could do what they want and do not restricted in their rights, and I wholeheratedly agree with this position.
Without any doubt, the children have more freedom thanks to their parents. The kids of 21 century have own opinion and choice. They become more self-condfidence and even, in spite of parents opinion the children could select the future profession by themselves, which could subsequently have major advantages for their own sake and country productivity as well. Morover, the modern children have very strong sense of responsability and, obviously can choose the partner for marriage, whereas in the past only parents could choose the spose for their child.
However, the freedom is flawed owing to several reason. Firstly, more freedom has the negative impact on children, they become more naughty. Also, the kids make decesion based on what they like, even though in most situation it is not neccesserily good for them. For instance, in the matters of food, according to children will, they would choose junk food with no vitamins and minerals. Secondly, the children have freedom in access to multi-devices and it tend to lead them sitting more time infront of screens. Futhermore, they may follow to the person who has a negative influence on children, hereby they become aggressive, impulsive and isolated. Thirdly, the children not really mature due to they do not have enough experience.
In conclusion, taking into account above mentioned arguments, the parents should give kids a chance and freedom to go along with their life and their hobbies that can lead them to manage their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed in their rights, and I wholeheratedly agree with this position. Without any d...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...thanks to their parents. The kids of 21 century have own opinion and choice. They becom...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...However, the freedom is flawed owing to several reason. Firstly, more freedom has the negative...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to junk'
Suggestion: to junk
...ing to children will, they would choose junk food with no vitamins and minerals. Sec...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tends'?
Suggestion: tends
...eedom in access to multi-devices and it tend to lead them sitting more time infront ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66644526714 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4944360249 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239571567034 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996262157906 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678166385809 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138228682869 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681528595204 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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