People think that it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build more houses. Do you agree or disagree?
Planting trees, in large metropolitans, is preferred over new construction by some. While they might have reasons behind their belief, I, however, think that both of these factors are essential for the balanced societal expansion; reasons behind my viewpoint will be provided in subsequent paragraphs.
On one hand, shelter is an essential necessity of life and with the substantial growth is population, it is indispensable to build more residential apartments to accommodate people. For instance, China has developed entirely new cities in abandon areas for the sake of next generation, keeping the current growth rate into consideration. This will not only provide livable habitat but also reduce the unmanageable predicament of large cities, which in turn will reduce crime rate and living cost. If people not found living space, it will culminates in inevitable consequences such as exponential increase in real state price resulting an increased homeless person count, who will not be able to afford.
On the other hand, trees are equally important for human survival, as they not only provide oxygen for breathing but also reduce greenhouse effect, which is constantly heating up our cities because of myriad of reasons. Plantation will not only decrease these environmental problems but will also provide habitat to many species, such as squirrels, which creates balance in ecosystem. For the sake of these reasons, parks are always planned in the development of modern cities. Furthermore, forestation could also be proceeded to tackle these issues. For example, One billion tree plantation program was successfully completed in Pakistan and was appreciated by many environmental organization throughout the world.
In conclusion, I believe that both of these factors are necessary for the evolution of fair society as new construction provides solution for living space and plantation help resolve the nature issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'culminate'
Suggestion: culminate
... people not found living space, it will culminates in inevitable consequences such as expo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5472972973 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97966078243 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4306472635 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716881692145 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02540266677 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292103054479 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371241302868 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233886194512 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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