Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Do you agree or disagree and give your view?
People's opinion differ when choices for relaxation are discussed. While some may think that indulging in activities related to entertainment help recover from stress, I, however, believe that rest periods and sleep are best remedies available. I will explain the reasons of my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, rest provide an opportunity to isolate from the worries anybody in facing in the daily life. While it could be in any form such as visiting a garden or taking a small nap in the office, it leads to satisfaction as it gives the time to think about the overall picture and observe the complexities in the neutral environment. For the sake of this reason, Google has installed rest-pods in the head office at California for the employees to clear up the minds and take a fresh start after that.
Secondly, Sleeping is a natural phenomenon, which is a part of human physical existence, as it generate hormones directly involved in the soothing effect that on need for the effective calmness. Not only it is a shut-down activity but also scientists have found the initiation of recovery procedure for physical damages like muscle fatigue happening in sleep, which provides the ground base for the recommendation of 7 hour sleep for an adult. If one does not take necessary sleep, it culminates in drowsiness, headache and even hallucinations in the worst cases.
Admittedly, entertainment activities, such as listening to songs, does distract mind from the regular activities but are only a temporary solution as per the research efficiency of mind decreases significantly after 8 hour of constant work and does not recover till taking a complete sleep.
In conclusion, although small pleasurable actions can clear up the mind but for the pursuit of daily routine work proper rest is essential.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worries'' or 'worry's'?
Suggestion: worries'; worry's
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...of mind decreases significantly after 8 hour of constant work and does not recover t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13422818792 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93233296893 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9407068833 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.090909091 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176577777698 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605277627424 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602298957317 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896449974531 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612221721609 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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