People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
There is great debate about individuals spend time on personal delight instead of things they should do. Despite the fact, there are differing opinions. Some people think that doing personal enjoyment can help to improve the efficiency of their work. Other people, however, argue that it is beneficial in many ways for people to not expect doing things they like because it is not possible. I , myself, agree with the first argue. In this essay, I will address three potential benefit of doing personal enjoyment.
First of all, when a person does things, she or he delight to do it, as a result, the performance will be higher and the output will be much effective. For example, my friends like to do music very much, but his parents forced him to do professional sports. Although he is doing what they wanted but he is not happy and doesn’t care that much about performance. May be, If they let him to work on music, he would get more successful.
second, continuously individuals spend more vitality and time for things they like to do instead of things they don’t like. as a result, individuals are would appreciate their time whereas they are doing things they like. For occasion, one of my friends always in office attempt to finish their errands which doesn’t like and begin n what she inclines toward to do.
To sum up, I believe doing what you pleased to do is much effective and more beneficial. This is why always we should do what we like to do.in differentiate, doing things with you appreciate would bring up your vitality, and unquestionably, he or she would spend more time to do it which is positive see. Hence, this see is much superior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
... they like because it is not possible. I , myself, agree with the first argue. In ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'delights'.
Suggestion: delights
...l, when a person does things, she or he delight to do it, as a result, the performance ...
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Suggestion: Second
... music, he would get more successful. second, continuously individuals spend more vi...
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Suggestion: As
...o do instead of things they don’t like. as a result, individuals are would appreci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75320512821 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59378094265 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8721009945 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.713333584856 0.244688304435 292% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25252943556 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.232273614986 0.0667982634062 348% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.511691054571 0.151304729494 338% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.253855668041 0.056905535591 446% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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