plastic shopping bags contribute the pollution of land and sea, some think
they should be banned.
Do you agree and disagree.
Plastic shopping bags are being discarded and dumped into garbage land sites
as well as seas. Many scientists say, that it has a cascading effect to all living organisms.
To overcome this, some people suggest to banned the plastic bags to save our planet of getting
polluted. In my view, I certainly agree to this thought in order to save our earth getting polluted
and to prevent animals getting affected with dreadful diseases when they consume plastic bags.
Firstly, plastic bags take more time to decompose, hence, when they dump in to waste land sites
and seas, which will be consumed by various fishes cause severe disease among them. When human
people eat sea foods they fall to ill. For instance, the recent research from Oxford university
says that, at present a greater number of people are getting affected with skin illness due to fish which they eat contains plastic toxin.
Secondly, people burn the unwanted plastic bags cause air pollution. Many kids are suffering from
breathing problems due to polluted air contents. Furthermore, some road workers suffer from asthma and bronchitis when they inhale polluted air. Additionally, several accidents are being reported due the poor air quality, which irritates many driver's eyes become the cause.
Finally, when people use plastic shopping bags while buying meat and vegetable causes dreadful disease such as cancer, suggested by various doctors. Also, many house wives store fruits in plastic bags for many days, which creates stomach upset among several children. For these reasons, I strongly recommend to ban usage plastic shopping bags from our society.
In conclusion, the Tamilnadu government has banned usage of plastic bags in the entire state and encourage, to use cotton bags, which is welcomed by many environmentalists. This will reduce air pollution and prevent various animals to stop consuming the plastic wastes.
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Suggestion:
...e recent research from Oxford university says that, at present a greater number o...
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Suggestion:
... pollution. Many kids are suffering from breathing problems due to polluted air c...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend banning'.
Suggestion: recommend banning
...children. For these reasons, I strongly recommend to ban usage plastic shopping bags from our so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32894736842 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44389078046 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2517213648 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216251241673 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786806887905 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497273601059 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843844896316 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624869215413 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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