Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At present, both husband and wife are engaged with busy work routine where
parenting becomes an intricate task. Therefore, some people suggest that this
skill need to be introduced at schools. In my opinion, I strongly disagree to this
thought while will be explained in the following passage with suitable example.
Nowadays, children learn more subjects at schools, and introducing parenting skill
will be a burden on them. In addition, they tend to forget this skill after some point of
time which will be waste of time for both parents and teachers. Moreover, some people
Assume that it is too early for them to acquire this skill where there other avenues to
Concentrate such sports, hobbies, etc. This will attribute to shape their career. Thus,
It has been assumed that educating parenting skills at school will not benefit students,
Instead they can utilize the time in other important skills for career perspective.
Many foreign countries parenting skills become a mandate during maternity tenure, which will aid
both husband and wife very effectively. For instance, In Canada, post delivery husbands need to
attend the parenting skill compulsorily else doctors will not approve their discharge form.
Furthermore, for any skill to be mastered hands-on experience is imperative, hence, learning
this skill with baby will be handy. Decades ago, parenting skills are taught by relatives and friends,
but at present situations have changed, therefore, these courses should be mandate during
pre or post delivery time.
In conclusion, parenting skill will be irrelevant when it is teach at schools considering other
subject pressures. In my view it should be taught when parents are planning to have kids, to make it more useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39568345324 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59167606878 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2308358914 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294758820016 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121653711244 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574948444119 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099475294679 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598666934969 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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