In this modern world, Some parents think it would be best idea if children learn how to be a good parent from their school. I think this kind of knowledge will have some benefits to children. This essay will discuss the benefits of this learning on relations and provide some skills which I think parent must have to become a good teacher.
To begin with, In this technology world children equipped themselves with electronic gadgets like mobile phone, laptop etc. and they feel their elders are good for nothing. Hence, if students learn how to be good parent at school then they understand the importance of their parents in their life. As how they sacrificed their wishes to fulfill wishes of them which enhance the bonding between them. Furthermore, it bring some sort of maturity level in them like they will try to understand the relation of parent and children. For example children discussed with their parents and also teach them if parents are lacking something in upbringing of their child. Overall, this type of learning will be a win-win situation for both parent as well as children.
Moreover, there are many skills required to be a good parent. First one is communication skills. Parents must communicate with their children and tries to understand their feeling and perspective. The relation of parents and children must be friendly, understanding, caring, loving and so on. Besides this, parents must teach moral and culture values to their children because they will not only retain these values in them but also lead them into a good citizen. Parents also monitors the activities of their child so that they use their energy in right direction.
In conclusion, I think it is very necessary to become a good parent as now children are influenced by many other factors. By learning these skills at the early stage will make quite matured and understandable which is also beneficial in their upbringing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98142414861 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57083042438 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2462487808 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323371526888 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131877426382 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114671886922 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230458499275 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935908140382 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.