Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantage for both and your point of view.
Vacations bring delight for students considering their enormous subject pressure. Some people believe multiple short vacations are required for their relaxation, but others assume one long vacation will help them to find part time jobs, which will help them to pay their tuition fees. In the following passage, I will explain more advantage of this these thoughts, before declaring my view.
During my school days, I used to have multiple short vacations in an academic year, which will help me to get refreshed by meeting with friends and relatives. In addition, many students use their time to concentrate on their hobbies such as: attending musical classes, playing games, etc. Also, the monotonous routine of going to school required frequent breaks to prevent them from being exhausted with exam pressure. There fore, it is believed multiple short vacations will help students to improve their concentration in studies.
On the other side, multiple long vacation will help students to find part time jobs, which will aid them to pay their school fees. More over, this would also reduce burden on their parents, as well as to create more responsibility at young age. For instance, my friend while pursuing his masters went for part time jobs during his long vacation, which helped to settle his accommodation cost to a great extent. Further more, pupils can go to other countries to relax them selves and to engross their knowledge in learning various nation’s traditions, how ever, such trips can’t be planned in short vacations. Thus, it is believed long vacations will help students to find jobs and to be independent.
To sum up, even though one long vacation will aid them to earn money for some students it is not, hence, multiple short vacations are the preferred choice which will help them get relax and will concentrate on their studies in leaps and bounds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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...pils can go to other countries to relax them selves and to engross their knowledge in learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, as well as, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08709677419 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53735669156 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1831380973 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219967632743 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907271281252 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610871899563 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157576558913 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290333167502 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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