Corruption becomes a common disease among several nations. What are the causes and measures to resolve this trend? Give your own examples and explain.
Bribe becomes a dreadful disease in several nations, where only rich people are able to enjoy various benefits. Common people are forced to pay extra to avail the most of the government services. In the following passage, I will explain both reason and measured to change this trend.
Few decades ago, bribe is an unknown term among people, but this has changed over the years. When government employees are paid with meagre salary, they are forced to bribe for the service they do and it spreads like a common disease in most of the departments. There is no standardized salary structure between state and private sector staff, which provoke them earn extra for all the obliged services. Moreover, with the minimum package they are unable to pay satisfy their dependent’s educational needs as well as to provide quality medical treatment during emergency situations. Furthermore, the increasing fee structure among academic institutions forces them to bribe in order to cater quality education for their children, which is vital for their career. For instance, my neighbour works in state job got caught due to corruption charges and the only reason is to provide optimum treatment for his injured son. Therefore, it is believed, different salary structure and incomparable quality of service between private and government hospital and schools are the major reasons for this trend.
Do common people’s living conditions are affected with corruption? Yes. At the present to get most of the government service people are forced to pay extra as bribe, where some poor people unable to find money end up in bad living standards. For example, countries such as Canada and Australia, offer unpaid medical and academic facilities to all citizens, such system should be introduced to eradicate this disease. Additionally, all the state and central jobs should be equally paid according to market standards, which will reduce huge finance gap among all employees. Also, the tax authorities should find optimum ways to ensure all business me pay tax genuinely. So that it helps the nation to reduce the price of domestic products and pass the benefits to locals. Thus, it is assumed, unpaid medical and educational facilities and standardised salary structure across government staff can reduce corruption significantly.
To sum up, as the proverb says,” prevention is better than cure”. If the government hasn’t take prompt action to reduce corruption then it will impacts common people’s living condition drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35162094763 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83058103204 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556109725686 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0764574787 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.947368421 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129584149159 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434511818331 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485447822344 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953818883173 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749080857508 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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