The population in most of the cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities.
What problems does overpopulation in cities cause?
How can these problems be solved?
In recent times, there is an increasing trend of population migrating to nearby major cities to find more opportunities. This essay will discuss the major problems of overpopulation in such places and propose possible solutions to curb this.
There are a plethora of elements which arise due to excess density of population in major metropolis, an important one to consider is the substantial increase in cost of living. This is because majority of people draw high salaries, which leads to higher spending capabilities. By virtue of this, there will be a significant rise in the prices of basic necessities such as housing, food, and entertainment. In contrast, in the past, due to paucity of population, the affordability was high in megalopolis. To combat this, government needs to invest and develop other promising towns by creating employment through industrialization or expansion of existing major businesses. As a result, there will be an alternative to major urban areas and issues of concentrated development does not arise.
Another cardinal danger of growing population in cities is lack of greenery in the environs. Due to erection of more concrete structures to accommodate more people, the bio-diversity is affected. To illustrate, highly polluted places in the world are major cities only. To alleviate this, awareness of Eco-friendly style of living needs to be created, which by planting more trees and use of electric vehicles can be initiated. Accordingly, it will compensate for less trees and control pollution in long-run.
In conclusion, higher cost of lifestyle and shortage of greenery are vital concerns of overcrowding urban areas. This can be minimized by development of other towns and encouraging Eco-friendliness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... be a significant rise in the prices of basic necessities such as housing, food, and entertainmen...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ed. Accordingly, it will compensate for less trees and control pollution in long-run...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43223443223 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29214988757 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2334619622 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160683471915 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532437261214 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597685945619 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1011594713 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601536619532 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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