The position of women has changed a great deal of in many societies over the past 100 years and The pressure on women has increased in society.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
During the past 100 years, the place that women has in society have gone through significant change. Nowadays women are expected to fulfill different types of responsibilities because of the changes in their socialization levels and the rules that the government have applied for controlling the effectiveness of the women’s base responsibilities. So I agree that the burden on women has become heavier.
On one hand, we can see that women’s level of socialization has changed and these days they are participating in different aspects of society which they did not have a role in before. Women are now taking responsibilities in politics, work environment, educational activities and so on. However, they still possess their traditional places in families as child care and house keeping.it is obvious that this amount of different kinds of responsibilities put a lot of pressure on the women in a society.
On the other hand, we can see that the governments have applied different types of rules for controlling the behavior of women, for example when treating their children. They also impose hefty fines for the ones who don’t obey these rules. These rules along with the rules applied in work place, thus far, play an important role in making the burden on women heavier than before.
By way of conclusion, the pressure that the women undergone in today’s societies is far more significant than what it used to be. So it seems that the government should take some measurements in order to help minimize the effects of this burden.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14509803922 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0977066091 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5070243643 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.272727273 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201440754868 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870703900091 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584681864651 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13369695306 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634165149105 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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