Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the
following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Vaccination (also known as immunisation) is the process of giving a child preventive medication against some diseases which can affect them in their childhood and span all through their lives. Children can be made immune to diseases like measles and polio from an early age so that they won’t grow up to be inflicted by the horrors of having these diseases. In view of this, parents need to be properly informed and held accountable for their children’s future health. A good way to make parents make this process top priority is for the government make laws that punishes neglect towards immunisation.
Most immunisations are taken in doses over a period of time, for example, polio immunisation is first given as early as a child’s 3rd month after birth and then also given in the 6th month, 1st year, 3rd year and 6th year after birth. Arguably, parents can indeed become overwhelmed with work and neglect or overlook subsequent appointments, however, government putting it into law would make parents more willing to take their children for vaccination, to at least, avoid the wrath of the law.
Research has shown that a large percentage of adults in Africa are disabled due to polio and malaria fever is one of the top causes of increase in mortality rates with the same region. These adults have not reached their full potential and are more of a liability than an asset to the society. With government laws in place to enforce vaccination, such ailments would be drastically reduced or even totally eliminated from a young age. When mortality rates decrease, the society is more productive and less is spent on healthcare.
To conclude, if the decision to vaccinate young children completely lies in the hands of the parents, they might misuse it. The government therefore has to make it a priority to enforce vaccination laws so that the general public remains healthy and death rates from these preventable ailments drastically reduced or altogether eliminated
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...immunisations are taken in doses over a period of time, for example, polio immunisation is fir...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...to enforce vaccination laws so that the general public remains healthy and death rates from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05775075988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8105592602 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5258160753 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21364090018 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734193892713 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601313633767 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116648235775 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790384909627 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.