"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget,
a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A famous proverb says, "Eat an apple every day, keeps doctors away". From our childhood, our society and parents teach us to practice preventive actions to stay away for health diseases, but health issue of citizens are major concern for government. Therefore, I accord with the notion of diversion of significant amount of health budgets from treatments to health educations and preventive solutions.
To embark on, millions of rupees are spent by individuals to cure their diseases, so do regimes in establishment of multi-specialty hospitals, medicine researches and so on. Government can save enormous amount of revenue if they shift their focus on health education. Firstly, through the support of media houses, heads of the state can spread awareness and benefits of inclusion of exercise in people's life. It is scientifically proven that exercise enhance our immune system, as a result less vulnerable to illness. Secondly, if spending on promoting sports and establishing play grounds increase by governments, it attracts those people, who wants to inculcate sports in their life but unable to do so due to infrastructure, which eventually attracts others who are less enthusiast to sports.
Moreover, there is no ending on diseases and their treatment. No one can guarantee that erecting the finest hospitals will make citizens healthy, while health education and preventive measures can. For instance, diabetes and heart attacks can be prevent just by taking few simple steps in one's life such as early morning walks and eat healthy. Furthermore, everybody knows that treatments of these diseases are costly and can use all their savings, if not insurance company has to pay a huge amount. In addition, ban on smoking, drinking also plays important role in overall health of a community.
To sum up, although in today's scenario investment in health care is important, but governments much shift their spending towards health education and preventive measures if they want a healthy society in the future, and cost involve in awareness programs are less and extremely effective in terms of revenue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...vent just by taking few simple steps in ones life such as early morning walks and ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33134328358 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92497712824 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635820895522 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5198005728 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194194774026 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641767205454 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721006352209 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120832561874 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559967652443 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.