It is argued that airline companies have taken into account mainly upper-class customers when they apply new improvements in flying service. I firmly admit this statement considering below-mentioned factors.
Evidently, the companies in the business of air travel try to increase the income using the positive changes in service towards the dreams of their customers in the upper-class. The first main reason is that people bought upper-class tickets want to see services compatible with the money they spent. This kind of customers would easily reject the services of the airline company due to lack of services and inconvenient flying. For instance, conducted marketing research based on customer`s surveys illustrates that nearly three-quarters of people chosen upper-class travel would like to see new and worthy services per trip.
With regard to the economic class customers, the companies are not willing much more to make a progress in flying services in relation to the mentioned group of people. While the recent modifications are considered for only upper-class customers in air excursion, airline companies provide less worthy services such as free water and sandwich to the people used economic class service. The abovementioned survey was also conducted among the customers who use down class travel and consequently, it was determined that although economic class customers are aware enough about the recent progress in comparison with the first categories of customers, they do not demand high-quality services and any improvements in air travel, even they would agree less quality of services in case of discount at ticket prices.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that it is precisely evident that major developments in airlines have been implemented considering the demands of upper-class customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...anies are not willing much more to make a progress in flying services in relation to the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58273381295 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03401860219 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8134901873 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160704534148 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679352144015 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043722649838 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102066736022 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360481366416 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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