Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in first class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advancement and development of new technologies, air travel, is becoming easier and safer compared to past. Undoubtedly, there is huge changes for different in classes on planes as of now. Because of the advancement in this area, people have question about the bias advancement in sitting arrangement on airplane. I shall discuss about it with example to solid my view in coming paragraphs.
People who travel in first class or business class, get good facilities and luxuries travel experience as air travel companies trying to offer more for those specific class people only. In these classes, traveler can get comfortable seats, food and drink as per their choice, other entertainment facilities, and in some plane, commuter can get shower on it as well. I, personally, think that it is possible because these people are paying a huge amount of money to travel in this classes. Sometimes, businessmen can not enough time to relax while they travel, that is one of the reason to book first or business class. Though, it has been seen that there is more development for these classes only, but air travel companies have done many changes and advancement for economy class too.
On the other hand, the big portion of plane is filled by economy travelers only. So, if airplane companies would not give good facilities to their big portion of traveler then the company might lose their clients and also affects many other factors related to the travel companies. Nowadays, in economy class, commuter can get entertainment equipment, food and drink of their choice, seat selection either they want window seat or in middle. Air travel is more common and feasible for every human being.
In conclusion, I, agree that there is enormous advancement in first and business classes, but there is have changes in economy class too. There are few less facilities are available for economy class people compared to other class traveler.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are huge changes'?
Suggestion: there are huge changes
...nd safer compared to past. Undoubtedly, there is huge changes for different in classes on planes as o...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ing a huge amount of money to travel in this classes. Sometimes, businessmen can not...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ges in economy class too. There are few less facilities are available for economy cl...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople compared to other class traveler.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63316166506 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0156584568 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240978345335 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888820349279 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577220898624 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161952372388 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421280182172 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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