You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
describe what the group does
explain why the group is good for the community
suggest alternative days and times for practice
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the update from the supervisor that the community hall will not be available for practice on Tuesday and Friday evenings for our musical band.
Our group plays the band performances in various kinds of festivals as well as on certain occasions in the community hall and public events which are held in Central park of our town. We need a big room like a community hall to practice and prepare for our performances before playing in the events.
We raise funds for poor and needy ones in the community by playing performances at different kinds of parties and public events. In this way, we are able to contribute a small donation through every occasion to our local community.
We understand that national debate competitions and certain national level competitions like quiz, and other games are going to take in the hall, due to this reason, the supervisor sent us a message about the non-availability of a community hall on Thursday and Friday evenings. However, if you will provide us others days for the practice, especially on weekends during afternoons, we would be able to continue our practice in the hall. I plea you to concur with my request to practice with my group on weekends so that we can continue to entertain our locals in the town.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87242798354 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73573734775 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547325102881 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6997130554 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226307728789 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854519649387 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631389956177 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125977163525 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732692464961 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.