Recent figure show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Statistics have proven an increasing violence in crime amongst children within the age bracket of 18 years and below, so according to some educational experts, lack of social and emotional understanding are fundamental reasons for this development. In my opinion, I vehemently disagree to this term as these children are mostly swayed by their friends, as well as the society as a whole.
One good reason to debunk inadequate social and emotional training from parents and teachers as a reason for an increased crime rate in children is that the friends they associate with mostly influence their thoughts and actions. In other words, children who interact and play with their peers on daily basis, especially in schools, result to drastic measures in order to get back at those that may have offended them. In addition, they tend to prove their maturity level, confidence and strength through the things they do. To cite an example, more and more youngsters have been reported to have caused harm and destroyed properties belonging to their mates in schools because of disagreements. These violent actions are punishable according to the laws of the school.
Another point to consider is their involvement online and on social media such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram, as most underaged children go as far as falsifying their age just to create an account. Most of these sites promote immoral and corrupt activities such as protests and theft with deadly weapons, through the contents and videos they read and view respectively, and as a result, such practises becomes their next line of action. At present, the world has made them believe that they can get what they want through violence of any sort, which they may show forth at any given opportunity.
To recapitulate, while psychologists sometimes claim that underaged kids lacking teachers and parental guidance result to more and more violent crimes, I believe that their social life with friends outside their homes, as well as the society contribute significantly to such development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18318318318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74315407216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4394817471 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.909090909 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27818520035 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101075709462 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081470265431 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166362168918 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629487422634 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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