Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to inform about a loss I incurred while on my vacation to Bangkok. My name is John Doe and I had recently been on a vacation trip to Bangkok. I booked my trip through Makemytrip travel portal and I had opted for a fully insured travel policy of your company (AXA Insurance) on this trip.
I have lost my gold chain while in Bangkok. I’m sure it was lost while I took a swim in one of the swimming pools in the hotel we stayed. The Hotel authority and the pool staff tried to look for the missing ornament, but to no avail. I had informed the Hotel authority about the incident and have the incident report with me to substantiate the matter.
As I am insured and have valid proof of the missing item, I request you to please look into this matter and help me to get the compensation for the lost item. I have attached the copy of the Hotel incident report , our booking details , a picture of the gold chain which was lost and the cctv footage of the pool area when the incident happened with this letter.
I hope to get a favorable reply from your side soon. Please let me know if I need to furnish anymore detail to begin the investigation.
Yours Sincerely,
John Doe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed the copy of the Hotel incident report , our booking details , a picture of the ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...el incident report , our booking details , a picture of the gold chain which was l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33624454148 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36518193129 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532751091703 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3499971274 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227666663757 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729291815126 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739309482014 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120244458162 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861149334045 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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