In recent years, Many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, the trend of shopping from mall is increasing at the speed of light. Due to that, local small businesses affected heavily and they are in crical condition to close it. If it is see as a development point of view, it is a positive flow. The positive effects are discussed further.
To begin with, the variety of products along with many options available at same place. There are lots of choices available for the same item along with various options for customers which come up with more pleasure of shopping. Another focal point is discount which attracts the buyer towards the mall. Many brands provides the seasonal offers to increase their sale, as a result, customer can grab more benefit. Furthermore, the parking is one of the crucial part in the city when people go to the out side for purchasing goods. Large shopping center have appropriate facilities of parking. Therefor, it is at the top of customer's choice, and buyer can easily transport their goods in private vehicle.
Additionally, people with a busy schedule can mange their leisure time with family along with shopping. The malls have many another options apart from only shopping . For instance, many malls have cinema , restaurants or cafes, amusment activities. Thus, the family memeber of all age group can go together for the shopping purpose and spend a quality time with family members by enjoying movie and food. Apart from these, many shopping centers have approval for 24 hour opening. So people can get the items whenever they want which is the best facilities as compare to the small local shops. Because, small shops have limited time boundary for open their business.
In conclusion, malls or big shopping centers provides more facilities and flexibilities to the customers as compare to the local small shops. So the buyer more prefer to avail the items from there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49448253174 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1097990694 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303241774619 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973445684235 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074629163431 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189020289935 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306557712499 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.