Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the most debated issues in the field of personality psychology is whether the features that we are born with due to genetic inheritance have a great impact on our character and its evolution or it can be related to the experiences we witnessed in our life path. In this essay, both views will be discussed.
Regarding the experiences that we encounter starting from our childhood then during the teenage period and lastly adulthood, all these figure out who we are, not only the style with which we trait others but also how we get up after a hard time. In 1994 a group of scientist specialised in human and animal psychology compared the behaviour of laboratory mice which were catered their food without any obstacles with another group of mice that have to solve a challenge every time to get their food treats, the conclusion was stunning the later group showed more developed characters than the previous.
On the other hand, the features that are conferred to us through our parents and ancestors like skin's colour, inherited disease and traits only have an influence on our appearance and overall health but nothing to do with our mindset and how we deal with the daily life's situations and challenges that confront us. To exemplify this, although some people are born with a tendency for depression, if they have the motive and raised on positive thinking they will overcome this tendency as long as they live in their earthly physical journey.
In conclusion, it may be true that some researches have proven that our inherited characters have a great effect on our characters but the influence of the experiences recorded in our memories cannot be undermined and I personally think that if the scientific research concentrates on the opposing point of view they will find different results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, may, regarding, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90228013029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66677983965 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3077217886 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.0 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.8571428571 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389708944015 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161322394624 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906253174525 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230834813768 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304056648178 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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