As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is a growing demand for more flights. what problems does this have on the environment? what measures could be taken?
It is irrefutable that the tourism industry is flourishing at a high pace. As people want to save their time, they prefer to travel through the fastest means of transport. As a result, the necessity of flights or more planes is increasing day by day. Such a trend is affecting the environment negatively. However, there are some steps as discussed below in the essay, to resolve the issue.
To begin with the problems, gasses emitted from the burning of fuel, which is used to operate air crafts, are causing a lot of air pollution. Due to this, the carbon monoxide and the carbon dioxide ratios are escalating in the atmosphere. As a result, it leads to ozone layer depletion and consequently, there is no protection to the earth from the ultraviolet rays that come from the sun. To illustrate, 70% of the dreadful gases in the atmosphere are an effect of the overuse of airplanes and are contributing to global warming. Another issue of such a trend is that these space machines require a lot of raw material for their manufacturing. Thus, it wastes a significant amount of natural resources of Earth such as coal, petroleum, and natural gas.
One of the solutions to rectify the increasing environmental problems would be taxing the flights or increasing the prices of tickets. It would divert people towards the other cheap sources of traveling such as through the land transports. For instance, people would prefer going by bus rather than paying a double amount for the same, in developing countries. Furthermore, awakening people about the detrimental effects of wasting natural resources would help in sorting the issues to some extent.
To conclude, the earth is converting to a boiling pot due to the increase in temperature. Although scientists are doing their best to make more fuel-efficient vehicles, still it is the time to preserve mother earth. Perhaps in the future, having resolved the issues of increasing pollution, there is hope people will enjoy the fresh air.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98498498498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85281175883 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561561561562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1650152817 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149435097397 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410131007307 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362637232131 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866236218708 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327985204861 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.